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Okay Brier, we'll try this again. Here's your prompt. It has two parts: 1, Let's imagine that you are a publisher for a major publishing house. You need to market this book to consumers. Write a 3 or 4 paragraph summary of the book, highlighting those areas that you think would be most interesting to prospective readers. 2. Pretend you are a reviewer from a major science fiction magazine. Write a review of this book. First, though, you need to go to Amazon.com and read reviews for four of your favorite science fiction books. This will give you ideas of what a review might entail.

Terry **Brooks** makes another great book. Walker and company are on an adventure fraught with terror and danger. Hunter Predd is a wing-rider who is looking for a person named Kael. When he finds Kael he finds a map to ice hendge. Then the adventure begins. He takes the map to the druid and gets it translated to elven. He is the first recruited on a mission to ice hendge as a scout. Walker the druid is the person who translates the map to elven. He leads the **expedition** to ice hendge. Along the way he gets to Shaterstone and gets attacked by vines and is **poisened** and gets healed by an empath. In ice henge a person called the Isle witch attacks him and he almost dies. The isle witch is a person who got **kidnapped** and taken in by the Mogwr to be his servent. She soon learns to use her magic. The isle witch is to find the magic of Ice Henge and make it hers.

Terry Brooks makes another **amazing** novel! Like his others it makes a jump right into the story no waiting just a straight shot of action, suspense and hardship to the end were you hear what **happens** and another **suspensedful** part. To make you want to read the next book.
 * It** is truly amasing the stuff he makes on paper and ink a must read.

Your marketing to consumers, on the other hand, won't sell books. Let's work on the structure here, as per our discussion. Hunt out and find yourself: capitalization - at the beginning of sentences, and proper nouns.
 * Brier, your review is great. It has personality and a liveliness and you give concrete reasons for your thoughts.

Brier, Hooray! Your second edit is MUCH better on the first section. I'm most impressed. You also fixed the edits.**